8月16日托福独立写作

　　“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

　　The reading students do on their own is as important as or even more important than the reading assigned by their teachers.”

　　题目解读

　　Ø论述主题：阅读

　　Ø人物主体：学生—老师

　　Introduction

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　　Body

　　First of all,no one would be more familiar to private learning than students themselves.In other words,although teacher is more authoritative in both the study plan and leaning process,which means they are supposed to be qualified enough for choosing the books or articles as supplement,who can give a nod to the idea that such capability is ubiquitous among all the instructors?The option is sometimes one size fits all regardless of individuality.【说理的部分用让步进行论述】At this point,leaners should take the charge since previous leaning has ensured them to keep track with the appropriate reading.【对比题的传统对比论证】I have once encountered a dilemma that the books recommended by my mentor during the reference searching have nothing to do with my topic,as he was the fellow in linguistic field instead of literature.What turns out to be more practical is the paper on my list in that the appendix is targeted to me.Under this case,I am sure that students should be accountable for the reading rather than teachers.【举例论证对说理进行强化】

　　解读：

　　✔说理除了因果论证也可以叠加让步

　　✔让步之后跟进的反驳要有依据

　　Body

　　Secondly,self-directed reading can stimulate more interest.【跟进另一个优势】It is always the case that passive reading can never be compared with the adverse.Learning is a procedure depends much on motivation.For students,especially those at rebellious stage,they show great resistance to forced study even it is favorable for their further learning.Should they know the reading is assigned by teachers,they would refuse to do that.Worse,some of them would give up the study.【递进论证】Instead,once they are given the opportunity to make the choice,they regard it as a privilege,through which they are more desperate to study.【依旧是常规的对比论证】Meanwhile,teachers can get rid of the trifle work in deciding the right material for students from countless books.To some extent,the overwhelming workload would be released.Isn’t this a win-win situation for all?

　　解读：

　　✔对比论证是核心灵魂

　　✔反向论证也是一种补充方式