托福写作举例子时需要注意哪些问题？

"不会论证"这四个字几乎就是托福写作的死穴。ETS的考官们在OG中反复强调fully developed的重要性，说的也就是这个理儿。

论证的主要方法有直接论证、举例子、引用他人观点和数据等等。在这里，最适合中国学生操作，也是最容易得高分的就是举例子了。

然而
很多同学说托福举例子像报流水账
感觉自己总是在凑字数
如果你也有这样的问题
那么今天的干货也许能帮助到你哟

托福举例子时需要注意哪些问题？
大家先来看一道托福真题：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：
Afterhigh school, students should have at least one year to work or travel. It'sbetter than attending university straight away.

解析：

这道题目是关于gapyear的话题，若证明支持gapyear，那么应该如何展开例子？（今天只讨论例子部分，因此以下片段仅为段落中的例子）
 
Step1：写一个过渡句表明要开始举例子
Kitty, a Chinese girl, is a goodexample.
 
Step2：总的概括一下这个例子的大意
During her gap year in Sydney, shehelps the locals to translate files and interpret.
 
Step3：开始具体说明发生了什么
She is so passionate about what she is doing now and she decided to a good translator or interpreter after coming back to university.
 
Step4：总结下例子然后点题，向我们要证明的方向靠拢
The internships and professional experience gained over the gap year will have much more influence on her future career development than a college degree.

最后整个例子段落出炉啦！

Kitty, a Chinese girl, is a good example. During her gap year in Sydney, she helps the locals to translate files and interpret. She is so passionate about what she is doing now and she decided to a good translator or interpreter after coming back to university.
The internships and professional experience gained over the gap year will have much more influence on her future career development than a college degree.

注意：千万不要写和主题没有太多关系的细节，比如今天是一个美丽的天气，这种话就不要说了，因为和我们的主题关系不大。